- Work on characters Elsie, Thomaz, Jade and Jaya, get them to have natural poses like Rory and a similar style so it all links together.
- work on a few pages that need different compositions. I.e. the last two pages of the book.
- Work more on detail and backgrounds adding texture and different scales of objects.
- Front cover changes : twinkles, change to a better style.
- Synopsis research
- Refine wording, check spelling and grammar, look at font and colour.
more in depth for the pages:-
front page – change stars around Flora
page 1 – A few more background details.
Page 2 – Change Floras stars
Page 3 – Done
Page 4 – Done
Page 5 – Change Rory to new style, add more background details.
Page 6 – Done
Page 7 – Street detail, surface pattern design
Page 8 – Floras stars
Page 9 – Done
Page 10 – Done
Page 11 – Change Rory to new style, look at other characters, add more texture and despairs.
Page 12 – Street detail, surface pattern design
Page 13 – Done
Page 14 – Done
Page 15 – Done
Page 16 – More background details
Page 17 – Change Rory to new style, look at detail behind tree to add depth
Page 18 – More street detail, change Floras stars
Page 19 – Change Rory to new style, look at other characters, details in the background to add depth
Page 20 – look at other characters, background details for depth, texture on Terrence
Page 21 – Change Rory and characters, background texture and details
Page 22 – Terrence texture, background depth and details, Thomaz design, Floras stars
Page 23 – Change Rory to new style, background depth and detail
Page 24 – Composition change, more garden details
Page 25 – Composition change, more depth, change Floras stars
Back page – more background and depth
Research Sarah Massini, looking at illustration process and book art work.
ruthgoodwinsillustration.home.blog 