With all of the following I have changed the wording to left align, I have added in a lot of larger plant illustrations to add depth. I have added small details to the children’s outfits, like shoe laces, pockets, glasses etc. I have changed the placement of some of the words to better positions. I have noticed I have still missed a few bits out which I will add in next, they are the details on all of Floras wings in each picture, glasses on Thomaz on page 11, and Jade’s buckle and shoe laces. Speech marks on page 3, 5 and 9. Left align on page 6. I want to add more illustrations to Floras bed on page 21, the white behind the words on page 22, a few leaves on the trees on page 23 and a darker green behind Rory in page 25 so he stands out more.
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