I have worked a bit on Flora’s features for the other piece, but still need to think about how to make her stand out more in piece 3 (flying on the leaf). I think playing around with the composition could work as you have suggested below with piece 4.
I have worked a lot on piece 4 (the rock), but I think the points you added about moving Rory back and making the plants larger and mushrooms so Flora looks smaller would be a good idea, Ill give that a go for project 10, and maybe bringing Flora into the foreground would help to see her expressions more.
Next submission 11-4-2025
I know your away and the feedback will come later.
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