I will have a look at the shadow around Rory, and try and add more in behind him for the upper part of his body. I think this will work in two ways, and give the shadow but also a sense of depth behind him in the piece.
I have added another larger plant in this project (8) for the Terrence piece 2, so this does bring it to the foreground, and also will add that counterpoint with the tree.
I have re-ordered the critical review bullet points in this project (8), so hopefully when I complete the summery in the next project it will flow better and work as a whole.
I will have a look at the suggested books and authors, Oliver Jeffers, Jon McNaught and Emma Carlisle.
I have sent this project in today, as I had already done all the work for it. But its no problem you are away next week that’s fine regarding the feedback with me.
Next submission 04/04/2025
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