Feedback from project 4

I am creating a list of objectives for 3.3 I will add this into project 6, this will help me get started when it comes to unit 3.3.

I will have a look at spelling and sentences on my website, as well as this work on my blog, I know I type quickly and sometimes forget to check back on the work.

I will try changing the line work pieces to a tint colour to stop the stark contrast on my website.

I can definitely add in pattern design and storyboarding to my skills audit, I’ll have a look and think what others to add and update this.

I did find the mid point review helpful, it helped me consolidate what I wanted to work on, and bringing in my research points too, helped it to work as a whole.

I will go back and look at paper qualities and the sensory level,I know I wrote about recycled paper would fit a environmental book, but yes, having that sensory effect would help children feel the paper differences.

With regard to the essay question, I can have a look at it connecting to r/ printing and electronic media, I do have enough room to add a bit about this, I just need to see how I can summarise what I have already written, and add this into it, to make it work with my initial question and all the research.

Yes the agent and publisher will give me feedback whatever happens, so that will be something to look at and will help whatever the outcome.

I have written the research for my critical review as paragraphs, I will summarise the whole pier at the end to connect the two parts together and hopefully link some outcomes so it works as a whole new piece.

Next project I will submit on 14th March.