Feedback 4

Thank you for the information on the grids I will take a look at the link provided and work on the pages where the grid will help the composition and hierarchy.

I will have another look at pages 8&9 having a different view point is something I would like to look into more for this page, and having the view looking out the window from behind Rory could be a good change, and will add more of a dynamic view and composition a bit earlier in the book. It is defiantly something I am looking at for some of the later pages.

I have had a problem with my neck, to be precise a trapped nerve! luckily working quietly on my degree work has been ok, but I have suffered with concentration, Hopefully it does not affect my work too much, but thought I would mention it anyway.

I have up-date my project plan, and also the submission dates especially from Sept – Nov, the end date stays the same at the moment, but I have had to re-arrange a few.